Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Two Voices Poem

"Freeze bitch!"
Oh my god
"I'm going to need that money"
"Just stay calm"
I've got five kids to feed
Please don't let them shoot
I wish things would have turned out different
I hope someone called the police
"You better not call the police"
"What do you want me to do?"
"Just put the money in this bag and nobody gets hurt"
"Here take it all"
"Yes! I'm gonna have a ball..."

1 comment:

John C. said...

I like how you captured both thoughts and words in this poem. Writing a two voiced poem can be a little tricky but I think this poem captured the idea of a two voiced piece. Kudos on the rhyme scheme at the end.